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Forbidden: Book One of The Arotas Trilogy by Amy Miles

Forbidden Book One of The Arotas Trilogy by Amy MilesForbidden by Amy Miles

Self-published, available in e-book format on Amazon. Buy this book here.

Forbidden is a paranormal young adult romance that follows our hundred-something heroine Roseline Dragomir in her journey to escape her blood thirsty and power-hungry husband Vladmir.

It’s a vampire story with a twist: these immortal blood suckers don’t need to drink blood to survive (but it helps with the healing process and makes them more powerful), aren’t afraid of the sun, and can come back from even the most gory assumed deaths. And while they are abnormally attractive, none of them sparkle.

Fed up with living in fear of her (extremely) abusive husband, Roseline flees the country and sets up a new identity as Rose, head-turning teenager at a Chicago high school. There she makes friends with a punky but spunky outcast named Sadie and her sweet brother William.

This is where things get a little…unbelievable. Roseline has been alive for hundreds of years, and although she looks like a teenager one wouldn’t really expect her to act like a teenager or care much about teenage drama. I also had trouble believing that the moment she lands in Chicago the first thing she does is rent a house and enroll in high school. Why would a hundred-something year old vampire on the lam bother with high school? Here is the part where you either toss down your e-reader device of choice in scorn or you employ some suspension of disbelief and soldier on.

I soldiered on. After a few amusing high school escapades our dear Rose meets Gabriel and falls in love. Of course love is never easy in a paranormal YA romance, and so trouble ensues.

Generally I fell in and out of interest with this book. The plot moved quickly enough to keep my attention, the characters were developed enough so that I could picture them and easily keep track of who is who, but often the storyline dipped into “really?” moments that were pretty jolting. Part of this problem is the subject matter. Rose has to go to high school so that she can meet her high school friends and they can become part of the story. Okay. This is a YA book so of course it makes sense that it would be set in an environment familiar to the YA crowd. Alright. Could the author have explained things just a little better so it was easier for the reader to swallow and follow? Definitely.

For those of you who aren’t thrilled with the thought of these high school shenanigans, don’t worry. Things change.

To avoid letting out any spoilers, I’ll stop here with the recap. This book is written with (mostly) a good flow and the writing has the appropriate amount of youthfulness without walking too far down “like, totally” lane. While I typically avoid vampire-themed books (no, I never read the Twilight series but I’ve read my fair share of vamp fiction) this one had enough fresh ideas that it didn’t feel stale. I also enjoyed the transcontinental settings (though they could have been fleshed out a little more, I often felt a little blind when it came to the surroundings).

Come back next week when I review Reckoning, Book Two of The Arotas Trilogy.

Bound, Punished, Possessed: The First Three Books of the Arelia LaRue Series by Kira Saito

Bound by Kira SaitoSelf-published, available as e-books on Amazon.com.

I am going to review these three books as one story, since each book is very short and flows into the other seamlessly.

These books follow the story of our young teenage protagonist Arelia as she accepts her powers as a voodoo queen and struggles to fight against dark powers and curses at the stately Darkwood Plantation set just outside New Orleans. There’s love, spirits and magic, and one very annoying blonde best friend.

This book has a very teenage voice, which I suppose is appropriate considering that it’s written from the first person point of view of a teenager. While I tried to adjust to this voice, it often made me feel like I was trapped inside of a car with a gaggle of teenage girls who just won’t stop talking. This feeling can be, as you might guess, rather annoying. Each book reads as if a girl is sitting right next to you telling the story, which leaves little to the imagination and takes away from the plot considerably. I also wasn’t happy to see the immense amount of pop culture references, from Lady Gaga to The Nightmare Before Christmas. Each reference took me out of the story and made me feel disappointed in the author.

I didn’t care for the two female characters, Arelia the protagonist and Sabrina her vapid blonde friend. Both have their interesting life details, yet they are stuck with one-dimensional personalities with a flair for the annoying. Sabrina is a self-obsessed rich girl with abandonment issues and Arelia is a self-deprecating poor girl with self-esteem issues. If you didn’t pick up on these things naturally through character development, the author helps out by telling you outright.

Not only does she talk outright about her many “issues”, but Saito has Arelia explaining everything to us rather than letting the story play out:

“Whatever you say,” I said reluctantly.

I knew I was more anxious than usual tonight because I wanted to look good. I wanted to be noticed, and I knew by exactly who. Although I felt beyond guilty for wanting what or who I did, I couldn’t help the way I felt. I wanted Lucus, and I wasn’t afraid to admit that anymore.

Okay, so theoretically I was trying to be all confident, but I knew that when I actually saw him, I’d probably say something stupid. – Excerpt from Punished

Saito needs to learn the great art of subtlety—not everything needs to be blatantly told to the readers and she needs to learn that we are smart enough to follow along without her hand-holding. As I read this book one of the first rules of writing rang in my head over and over: Show, Don’t Tell.

That said, I read all three books and genuinely enjoyed them. I even found them somewhat addicting. While Saito’s pace is incredibly fast (Arelia is always in conversation with someone and something dramatic is always happening) it does keep the story moving and kept my attention throughout all three. She’s good at leaving cliff hangers and I was always left wanting more of the story.

Which brings me to what I liked: the story. Saito’s characters may be flat, annoying, and unlikable, but her story is incredible. She dabbles with mythology and magic while setting her story in (obviously fictionalized) history. Much of the story involves Haitian voodoo spirits, which Saito did her homework on instead of making up (I was happy to find) and slavery.

She also has a great way with sensory details, focusing primarily on food, which always captures my attention and praise. After reading these books all I wanted to do was go straight to New Orleans and eat everything Saito mentions in her books.

The fourth book in this series (Oppressed) is not yet available, but I can tell you that I will read it and probably the rest of the series. I do wish she wrote this series as a trilogy, however, and that she get herself a better editor. I believe these books, given more time and editing, could be something really impressive.

You can read the first book in this series, Bound, for free. Punished and Possessed can be purchased for $2.99 each. All books are only available as e-books.